feedback on my poem please; whether it be good or bad. =)?
Hello! I just wrote this poem and I was hoping to get some feedback; whether it be good or bad. =)
((I'm 15 if you need a judging age))
The Moon
What is that ball hanging high in the sky?
Is it a dull, weathered softball,
Or a smoothed and polished pebble?
Does it bring sadness and sorrow,
Or does it provide peace and pleasure?
Does it scare young children at night,
Or bless two young lovers walking under its light?
What is that charming, mysterious glow,
That shines on all of us,
down here far below
Is it joyous radiance,
Or a ghostly fog?
What is that ball hanging high in the sky?
(C) H.L
I think it's great! I think that you could add on but it isn't really necessary.
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